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sunrise under the mirror: by ~777333:icon777333:



I heard you smiled today
And I found myself lost in a memory
Of the future and the way
That all our cards were gonna play out.

Your ace up your sleeve was nothing
Nothing but a little game to you.
I'm not sure I care
Though I'm still fine to stand and stare
At everything as it all goes by:
At the catch in your voice
And the way we shake hands
As we pass in the street,
Just like two strangers who know
Everything about each other.

I can walk away slowly
Because I don't wanna run.
Holding my head above the waves
In this draught upon the shore.

Somehow I don't really care,
Not anymore.
Just because it's you.
And you, for some reason,
You smile.
©2009 ~777333
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:iconhelenavampire:
this is really good.

the first line really caught my attention, hearing you smile..thats deep.

the last line has a touch of irony, i like it alot.

great poem :#1:
:icon777333:
thanks hun ^^ i'm glad someone liked it =)

i said i heard you smiled to someone and laughed about it... it kinda acts in two ways. i heard, you smiled today (as in someone told me that you smile) and i heard you smiled today (as in using different senses in place of those normally used)

glad you liked it! xx

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:iconhelenavampire:
:heart: =)

thats funny, the replacing of the senses, it adds a nice touch to it,

the you got me thinking, i may use that phrase at some point because i truly feel at times you can "hear" someone smile =)

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